2012年3月7日星期三

sentences

1. In my opinion, work regulation for international student is not very resonable.

2. To me, people shouldn't have guns except police.

3. I believe that many people agree about gay marriage.

4. I strongly believe that international students are disagree about work regulations.

5. It is my opinion that people having guns is very dangerous.

6. I think that gay marrige is controversial.

7. It seems to me that having a gun is crime.

8. From my piont of view, same-sex school is very boring, I will never go to this school.

9. I am certain that gay marriage will be agree in several countries in few years.

1 条评论:

  1. #4 use active voice
    #8 spelling, run on sentence
    #9 wrong word (agree)

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