1. In my opinion, work regulation for international student is not very resonable.
2. To me, people shouldn't have guns except police.
3. I believe that many people agree about gay marriage.
4. I strongly believe that international students are disagree about work regulations.
5. It is my opinion that people having guns is very dangerous.
6. I think that gay marrige is controversial.
7. It seems to me that having a gun is crime.
8. From my piont of view, same-sex school is very boring, I will never go to this school.
9. I am certain that gay marriage will be agree in several countries in few years.
#4 use active voice
回复删除#8 spelling, run on sentence
#9 wrong word (agree)